Document Type
Article
Publication Date
Spring 2022
Journal
VBA Journal
Volume
49
Issue
1
First Page
12
Last Page
13
Abstract
We have belabored the archaic and prohibited use of "said" as a synonym for "the." But this paragraph needs more work. First, the phrase "irrespective of the fact that" is wordy and could be replaced with the plain language alternative of "even though." Second, "one or more of the parties now is, or may become, a resident of a different state" also could be streamlined. The phrase is easy enough to understand but cut to the chase. Replacing this phrase with "either party now or later resides in a different state" does the trick.
Recommended Citation
David Spratt,
Debunking the Efficacy of Standard Contract Boilerplate: Part IV,
49
VBA Journal
12
(2022).
Available at:
https://digitalcommons.wcl.american.edu/facsch_lawrev/2134